he loved a challenge
took off his clothes and jumped
in
the water looked marvelous
she said a young attractive blonde despite he wasnt attracted to blondes
with gleaming white teeth a tan a tennis outfit highlighted with babyblue
panels
she
said I’m really good from behind. who
was he to argue then put her hand to her mouth
as she laughed disingenuously
he disregarded her remark was fascinated rather by the syllables in her sentence couldnt have been too attracted seven in a pensee the second
line action is described in seven syllables
thisll be a riot in real time
the final thought is six syllablesEASY DOES IT
Innuendo no doubt
thats two of five elements
subject two syllable A tease
three of five
description second line
four
setting third line eight
Shes preening on a tennis court
four of five
description One hot Mama
all jumbledup like wooden balls turning in a Bingo cage
Stop stop turningplease Im dizzy
Awright Were done
A tease
One hot Mama
I’m really good from behind.
Shes preening on a tennis court
Innuendo no doubt
afternoon, Reggae Friday, 10 9.
21
2304, Twosday,
28 9. 21
Sam Cooke Wonderful World https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdjgj5A2gOs
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