You talk to yourself?
Of course
Of course.
Just like that?
Just like that
You don
I’m not comfortable admittin . .
. . Yet comfortable to ask
I thought you’d ask me why.
I write
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Now
Given I live with four cats
Every morning at breakfast as I feedem I tellem the day the date if theres an anniversary birthday or something special about it
I ask if
they know the year
Figurefingers crossed one might belchsay Twothousandtwentysix
Then I make my mint
Take the show on the road
Whas the year
belch Twothousandsix
Strike
while the irons hot
Year over they wont know twothousandseven
Compelling reason to defend talking to
yourself.
No defence
Me an my cats
afternoon, Thursday,
21 5. 26
1932, Saturday,
23 5. 26
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