haiku

couldnt kill him with sarcasm

hollow-point bullet would go

over his head

first line 8 syllables second 7 third 4

Aww  structurally exceeds 17 syllablesTOUGH 

                                                    rules are meant to be shakenup like Bonds Vesper Martini

1150,  Monday,  21  8. 23

1523,  Reggaefriday,  25  8. 23