25.9.21

 

Never heard of a pensee

his brother shrugged
                       A what?
Pensee

Nah. What’s that?

A fun little exercise
                     Five lines First line is the subject two syllables  everything following is dependent on the number of syllables

Awright, I’ll play; two syllables, that sucks.

Thats so you

Ain’t it?
        What’s next?

The description of the subject four syllables Followed by action seven syllables Followed by setting eight syllables final thought six syllables

What’s next?

Description Four syllables

Of what?

That sucks


his brother languished he might have had one beer too many to entertain the task of a pensee

 

on the return flight from his fathers 90th birthday he scribbled on a napkin provided with a fortified Bloody Mary That sucks

Description Four syllables
                             A hairy bone  it was his kid brother afterall
rolling

action seven
              Nibble nibble nibble bite

setting eight
              In the back seat of an old car

final thoughts six
                   Got something on your chin

he wrote the pensee as a text to his brother and sent it off when he landed in California


a week later he hadnt heard a thing

his brother was either more lousy on a cellphone than he or he didnt remember he provided the subject and hence was uninterested in replying

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