You’ll excuse me for saying so .
.
.
. Mebbe
he leaned forward heavily onto
his elbows on a hardwood kitchen table
she
emitted an uncomfortable squeak
Come now were friendsyou were saying
Yes, I was saying . excuse me . .
I’ve noticed in your writing you’re not keen on settings, you rarely imbue the
dialogue to a time or place.
Nope
May I ask why?
Of course the chair groaned as he leaned back Whas said supersedes where its said performedWheres
this being performed
she looked around
she couldnt say
things around her were out of focus
coloured film projected on unmooredhanging muslin bleachedwhite burlap or dampsuffering
papertissue inchoate insubstantial
Looks temporary distressed doesnt it
Yes.
However its not diminished our
ability to talk to communicate
No.
Then you might agree that it
doesnt matter where we are
Your feet may
not even be on the ground an without a
vantage pointwithout scale Without
We still can talk
Our communication is
essential not where we speak Where is ultimately superfluous extraneous
Rarely does setting make
conversation
1101, Thursday,
19 8. 21
1154,
Sunday,
22 8. 21
Kip Hanrahan Ah, Intruder! (Female) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0b7zrpiW4TI
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