the bait
a sudden unspeakable sweat
eight syllables
hed start from there
create a pensee around a
suggestion by Anne Carson
might have stepped in it
the fourth line of five eight syllables is the setting a sudden
unspeakable sweat
rolling . .
line one subject
two syllables armpit
second line description adolescent
third line action
seven syllables taut nimble
fingers tickle
fifth line final thought
six syllables desirous once more please
wellshit
dug out of that nicely Stoked deserve strokes and pats for that
armpit
adolescent
taut nimble fingers tickle
a sudden unspeakable sweat
desirous once more please
pensive
pensee
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