4.2.26

he stepped in itGawddammit   Gawddammit  gawddammitgawddammit 

not a curb to sit on

a stick to be had


he sat down on the stiff brown fall grassbent his kneeturned his leg so he could see the bottom of his shoe 

        smeared sole

    tuckedup into the heel

       looked turdish

wasnt

didnt smell like shitit smelled
                                       awwfull
if he walked into a building people would turn and look at himknow it was him as they did when he wouldve bet dough his fart wouldve been silent

                                                    it betrayed him
if he couldnt trust himself
                             Who then rhetorical


Wha smells                 

OhChrist he was gonna have to contend with them
                                                   I stepped in something
Yathink

           Wha
Ive no idea

Scrape it off

Ive nothing to use

Stand
           Scrape it off in the dry grassdrag your foot

Asshole  Think I havent tried

from the back  couldnt see who
                             I think I know wha it is  Smelled it more than a hunred years ago
A hunred yea . .
. . Don make a facethink I woudnt remember a stink like tha


    Thas better
                   Ostranenie   Ohstranenie   O  S  T  R  A  N  E  N  I  E  Yalike strange

Sayin it means nothing

Defamiliarisation

                     Cat named Victor Shklovsky Russian Formalism movement Force others to see common things in unfamiliar or strange ways
                                                   Sees a sense

Smells a sense
Touch it
Im not touchinit

Might imagin . .
. . Tastins off the table


Unfamiliars kinda like defamiliar

    Is

Lets go with tha a rumble a hubbub crowdsourced  they agreed

    Ill make it unanimous

a wave of applause

 

Wha am I to do with my sho . .
. . Lose it

1102,  Tuesday,  3  2. 26

https://www.gilliamwritersgroup.com/blog/defamiliarization-the-art-of-making-strange

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